Developing Natural Writing Talent the World Can’t Resist

Metaphorically, imagine that the great writers who move humanity: Stephen King, JRR Tolkien, and J.K. Rawlings, for example, know what the rest of us don’t yet know: that there’s a secret radio station, if you will, that they can tune their brains into. No machine, no technology, has ever been able to pick up this radio station. Only certain human brains can tune into it. Once tuned in, the Great Stories of Humankind are downloaded through that human’s brain, and onto their writing page. Once downloaded, the human will go back over and make sure his or her spellings are correct, that grammar is presented appropriately, and so on. But it was that radio station that poured out the original content that would shake the world through novels, award-winning columns, perhaps even movie rights.

Everywhere, people are wanting to tune into the same station so that an as-yet untold original story can download through them, but instead, they use a part of their brain that’s not wired to that station. They use their left-brain hemisphere, and try to work on spelling and grammar, participate in fear-based critique groups, and try to copy what others have already done, but they still can’t tune into that flow themselves. Those who are tuned in may have been born wired to it. They themselves may not even know it exists, because for them, there’s no other way of thinking. Why would one need to “develop” anything?

The above metaphor describes why successful writers are either born with, or have found a way to develop their right brain hemispheres, and have also developed the “highway” between the right and left brain hemispheres, so they work as partners instead of in isolation from each other. The right hemisphere “hears” great stories, is plugged into the Great Radio Station, and the left hemisphere then serves the right hemisphere by polishing with proper grammar and editing.

This explains why some professional writers do strange things: Gather for “free writing” sessions where the pen must keep moving across the page and yet nothing of apparent value will necessarily be produced. Engage in “clustering,” or mind-mapping, another form of right brain development, or “sing” their stories aloud, which merges the left-hemisphere verbal with the right hemisphere’s musical ability, strengthening the highway between the two hemispheres.

Not all writers find workshops or writers’ groups helpful, some even find them detrimental. But some believe that certain group activities and solitude writing practices were what helped tune them into that Great Radio Station. When considering a writers’ group or workshop, find out what they will be emphasizing: Learning to edit? Critiquing each others’ work? Freewriting? Clustering? From that point, decide what you’re most in need of, and whether such a gathering would serve you.

Barbara Adams
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Book author with traditional royalty publisher;
Writing coach and professional editor
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188 Stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth): Confronting but not Conquering the Inner Challenge

The Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188 stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE HERO’S JOURNEY:

a) Attempts to tap into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told.

b) Gives the writer more structural elements than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

c) Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually four).

d) Gives you a universal structural template upon which you can superimpose your situational story. This is why stories such as Alien (1979), Gladiator (2000), Midnight Cowboy (1969), American Beauty (1999), The Graduate (1967) and many others (all deconstructed at the URL below) appear to be different but are all constructed, almost sequence by sequence, in the same way.

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*****Push into the Inner Cave*****

Pushes and Pulls are an underrated aspect of storytelling. Pushes and Pulls force the Hero et al from one stage of the journey to the next.

A pull or push of some sort will drive the Hero into the Inner Cave. This is where the Hero confronts (but does not conquer his Inner Challenge) hence it is not unusual to encounter resistances or obstacles to the Inner Cave. Again, resistance to change is natural. In City Slickers (1991), Mitch talks about being able to look at a Picasso but not take it off the wall.

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Creative Writing: How to End Your Novel

Have you ever read a book with an unsatisfying ending? Annoying, isn’t it? You’ve just read this exciting, emotionally draining and captivating novel, then arrived at the end only to be left hanging on the edge of a precipice. What happened to the characters? Were all of the problems resolved? The ending to a novel is almost as important as the beginning.

How to End Your Novel with Dialogue Some of the most wonderful novels have ended with dialogue. The main character says something witty or funny, and you close the book feeling like all has ended well. Dialogue can be a powerful way to end your novel as long as you do it creatively.

The best type of dialogue with which to end a novel is closure the last phrase gives both the reader and the characters a sense of finality, which signals that the story is over. You’ll see this done fairly often in movies, and it can be just as attractive at the end of a novel.

Just make sure, if you end your novel with dialogue, that you haven’t left any questions unanswered, and that the previous prose brought the story to a close. Personally, ending a novel with a question seems cheap, as though you are cheating the reader.

How to End Your Novel with Prose This is the most popular way to end a novel because it allows the author to say everything that needs to be said. For example, you can end your novel with an Epilogue that explains what happened after the final scene in your novel. It can project days, months or years in the future, which is especially helpful in a romance novel.

If, however, your novel does not require an epilogue, you can simply bring it to a close in the present. The characters have solved the mystery or thwarted the great evil, which means that there isn’t anything left to say. It’s better to end your novel with a bang than to drone on with meaningless and senseless words that only serve to leave your reader with a bad taste in his or her mouth.

How to End Your Novel with a Cliffhanger There is only one instance in which this is acceptable, and that is when you have planned a sequel to your novel. Often, trilogies will end the first two novels with a cliffhanger, which ensures that your readers will purchase the next installment.

You have to be careful not to anger your readers, however, because if they are frustrated at the end of the novel, they’ll simply give up on you as a writer. My best advice is to tie up all of the loose ends – save one – and leave the reader wanting more. A novel – even one with a sequel – that doesn’t answer any of the reader’s questions will be frustrating, and you might lose their interest.

Laura J. College is a professional ghostwriter with more than ten years’ experience writing fiction and non-fiction manuscripts. Her work can be found all over the Internet, and she is currently accepting ghostwriting clients. Check out her website at laurajcollege.com laurajcollege.com

Hero’s Journey, Monomyth (188 Stages) - Screenplay Writing Secrets

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The 188 stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188 stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE 188 STAGE HERO′S JOURNEY:

a) Attempts to tap into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told.

b) Gives the writer more structural elements than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

c) Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually four).

d) Tells you what to write. For example, at a certain stage of the story, the focus should be on the Call to Adventure and the micro elements within.

ABRIDGED TIPS, EXCERPTS AND EXAMPLES:

(simply go to heros-journey.info/ heros-journey.info/ for full details)

*****Unbearable Antagonism*****

Beyond the Engagement with the Antagonism, the Hero requires an Unbearable Antagonism to push out the Inner Resolve. In Brokeback Mountain (2005), Ennis won’t be able to come out until November.

*****Night Sea Journey subplot*****

Just as the Hero suffers a Near Death Experience, so do subplot characters. In Brokeback Mountain (2005), Alma runs from Ennis and the house and finda another postcard from Jack. Lureen doesn’t say anything when they insult Jake; didn’t that piss ant used to ride bulls; he used to try.

*****Leaving behind a tangible of the Old Self*****

With a goodbye of the Old Self, we see the Hero leave behind a tangible part of his old self. In Brokeback Mountain (2005), Valerie sees Ennis in the café. She leaves.

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How Many Words Does It Take to Convey a Thought?

If you are an article writer and perhaps you want to convey a thought; have you ever considered how many words it takes to convey a thought? Well, let me give you the short end of it and here is a thought; I am! You see, it does not necessarily take a lot of words or a long sentence or a long paragraph or a long article to convey a thought. In fact, if you will reread this paragraph you will see that it does convey a complete thought.

That thought being that; conveying thoughts with words, does not necessarily take a lot of words. Do you see my point? In fact the paragraph above conveys two thoughts. The first thought is that it does not take a lot of words to convey a thought. And the second thought is the example given; I am. I am. Well, this a complete thought and it is a complete sentence and it conveys a specific point. Now then, as you can see the second paragraph, this paragraph is not needed here because you already know what I meant by the first paragraph. Even though I have doubled the words and written an additional paragraph even longer than the first paragraph; the second paragraph is not needed. You already got the point.

Does the additional paragraph in fact add anything to the thought? No, it does not; not in the least. I am convinced that you already understood from the very first paragraph and needed no further elaboration. Would you say that the thought in the first paragraph is garbage? Would you say if it does not fulfill the reader with the proper message? Do you believe that an article must be 250 words to be a complete thought or have meaning to the reader? Because right now in this article we are at over 250 words right now.

You see, the word count of an article is completely irrelevant to the conveying of human thought from one person to another in the written form. As a matter of fact a single quote, well written may convey more thought than in an article of 2500 words. For instance; Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death! If I continue this article and give more examples of the original thought that might be nice, but since you already got the point, then the number of words to convey a message is irrelevant. Now then I will soon be at 350, 400 or 500 words in this article you see? Would that make this article more significant; yes or no!

All too often article writers will write too much and their wording will be too flowery and that simply doesn’t work for the modern Internet surfer. People won’t read it, because it is too long. If they have to scroll down the page in an Internet article you will lose 40% of your traffic, does that help your article marketing efforts? I should say not. Where will the Internet surfer go next? Well instead they will click out of the article and go read something else, you lose.

If you will note that the average news story on the Internet is written with less than 250 to 300 words then you will see my point. And a news article is explaining any event not just a thought, which is generally wordy due to the number of details in it. Sometimes to engage the reader; less words are better than more, because you got them thinking and engaged their minds. In article marketing the goal is to get the reader to do something. Do what? Well, to get them to change their opinion, consider an alternative view, think about something, buy something and to visit your website for more information. But if you give them all the information, why should they go to your website? And if the article is too long they get bored and leave. Either way this makes little sense really. But in reality my point is that it does not take a lot of words to convey the point that thoughts and concepts can be conveyed in very little words. Now then if you are still reading this now, they you are mostly likely the remaining 50% or so, I lost the others. Who did that hurt? Me, so why am I wasting my time writing this article? You get the point. Perhaps you might consider this in 2006; just a thought.

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188 Step Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) - Story, Writing and Screenwriting Secret

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The 188 stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188 stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE 188 STAGE HERO’S JOURNEY:

a) Attempts to tap into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told.

b) Gives the writer more structural elements than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

c) Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually four).

d) Tells you what to write. For example, at a certain stage of the story, the focus should be on the Call to Adventure and the micro elements within.

ABRIDGED TIPS, EXCERPTS AND EXAMPLES:

(simply go to heros-journey.info/ heros-journey.info/ for full details)

*****Demonstrating the Changing*****

As the Hero evolves, both in the First Threshold and the Road of Trials, the Changing is demonstrated. In Brokeback Mountain (2005), the sheepherder asks, “…I thought you didn’t need soup….”

*****Anti-Hero*****

There are various types of Hero: a) the good, willing Hero (Star Wars, 1977), b) the good, unwilling Hero (Shawshank Redemption, 1994), c) the Anti-Hero (Raging Bull, 1980; Goodfellas, 1990; Scarface, 1983) etc. Nevertheless, their stories all mirror the Hero’s Journey template. The difference between hero, anti-hero and other variations simply lies in situation, motivation and result (Hero’s evolve, Ant-Hero’s regress). The different hero-types are simply alternate archetypes.

*****No Going Back*****

There are at least two stages of No Going Back. The first is entry into the First Threshold. In The Matrix (1999), Neo is given the choice between the red and blue pills. In Romancing the Stone (1984), Joan crosses a bridge which falls away; when Jack crosses, the vine falls away. In Bonnie and Clyde (1967), No Going Back is expressed by the killing of the guard as he jumps the car. They’re wanted for murder now.

*****Antiheroes in the Final Conflict - Devolution*****

Heroes evolve and Antiheroes devolve. During the Final Conflict, devolution is expressed in a number of ways. For example, In Bonnie and Clyde (1967), the papers say that Clyde left his brother. This is not how he wants to be remembered.

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Self Publishing: Is this the Way to Publish Your Book?

Self publishing might be the best way to publish your book. There are several advantages to self publishing that you might not have considered.

First, and most important, self publishing places you firmly in control of your book. When someone else is paying you to publish your book then they make many decisions regarding the editing of the manuscript, the cover, the title and the marketing that can impact not only how well your book will sell but also how it will be received by the reading public. For example, my second book ended up with the title “Kentucky Kisses” simply because my publisher’s marketing department reported that books with the word “kisses” in the title sold well. I felt the title was rather frivolous for the content but my wishes were ignored.

Self publishing is also faster than traditional publishing. With my novel, Kentucky Kisses, it took me over a year to find a publisher interested in buying and several months before we went to contract. Then after the contract was signed it was another 18 months before my book was released to the public. That is a long time to wait.

Self publishing also allows you to retain all the profits from your endeavor. While you may have to put some money up front (depending on the method you use to self publish your book) you will not have to wait for months or years to see income as a result. Most publishers only pay royalties once or twice a year and then those royalties are only a small percentage of the book price. When you self publish your book then once you have covered any publications costs everything you earn is pure profit.

Finally, it cannot be overlooked that self publishing offers you an opportunity to break into print that might not be otherwise available. The simple fact is that traditional publishing is highly competitive and many worthwhile manuscripts (and authors) cannot find a publishing home although there may well be an eager and receptive audience for that book.

It should be noted that self publishing may not be for everyone. If you are still struggling with your writing and voice, or your manuscript still needs polishing, then you should continue to work on your book and perhaps bring in the assistance of a critique group or professional editor. Self publishing a book that is not yet ready for publication could be a costly mistake. If your manuscript has been polished and well received by several critical readers then you should at least consider self publishing your book.

Not only does self publishing offer you the advantages of complete control, faster publication, and higher profits, it is easier and less expensive than it has ever been before thanks to modern technology. Self publishing could be your big break as a writer.

Deanna Mascle shares tips about writing and publishing with her newsletter

Is There Really a Difference Between Online Copywriting and Copywriting for Print?

One of the biggest copywriting mistakes I’ve seen over and over again is writing about features rather than benefits. But, you say, I want everyone to know all about my great product. How do I get them to buy it if they don’t know about its great features? Sorry to burst a bubble, but the truth is they just don’t care.

What they do care about proves a basic truth about human nature—we’re basically selfish creatures. We care about benefits instead of features. “What’s in it for me?” That’s what’s really important. What that means is that you need to know exactly how your product or service will benefit your readers, and then be able to convey it to them in terms they’ll understand.

Another common mistake is writing to everyone. Your target market cannot be “everyone”. If it is, nobody will truly get the message. And if nobody gets your message, nobody is going to buy either.

Determining who your target market is before you start to write will at the least, focus your writing. And go even further than determining a broad target market if you can. Narrow your target market to a niche market instead. Who are your most important potential clients? Determine who your most important target is and write directly to them.

Pick one topic and stick to it.

Prove your authority. You can use case histories, testimonials, cite important studies or use your own published articles. The point is that people buy from experts. Make sure that’s what you are.

Whether it’s print or online copywriting, make it easy for them to respond. Send a self-addressed, postage-paid envelope or business reply card if your copywriting a direct response piece. If it’s online, use convenient order forms and make them accessible from every page.

And while we’re on the subject of ordering, if you don’t tell them why they need to order now, they most likely won’t.

Procrastination, it seems is a basic human tendency. So, if you don’t tell them to order now, they’ll most likely put it off until tomorrow and tomorrow and yet another tomorrow, until finally they’ve simply forgotten.

Entice them to order with limited time or quantity specials. Create a sense of urgency about it so they really will order today.

There’s an old copywriting formula to keep in mind while you’re writing. It applies to any type of copywriting that sells. That old formula is AIDA

Attention. Grab attention with interesting headings, photos, subheadings, etc. Your first headline really makes or breaks your copy. It’s the first thing read and possibly the number one deciding factor for your reader staying or leaving.
Interest. Create interest with your first sentence and your first few paragraphs.
Desire. Stimulate desire with benefits, testimonials and case studies.
Action. Ask for action now with special pricing, combinations, limited time or quantity offers. Give them a really good reason to buy Now.

Repeat your main benefit, and ask for action again with a P.S. Interestingly the P.S. is the second-most read line in print and online copy. Some experts say one P.S. is best, while others use two or three.

So those are some similarities for all copywriting that sells. How is online copywriting different from print?

Various studies have shown that the internet is a culture of its own. The internet was originally a place for sharing free information, and it remains that way today. In keeping with its culture, freely share information you’ve gained and you’ll get more visitors. And that also means to eliminate the hard sell, and practice the soft sell instead.

Remember that internet visitors are usually impatient for information. They generally prefer shorter pages than you’d usually write for such things as a direct response package.
A general guideline is to use half as much as your printed text. Keep sentences and paragraphs short. Break long copy up into more than one page, or use modules instead.

Don’t overload your readers with irrelevant content or links. People came to your site for a reason, and that reason was represented in their search term. Your page needs to be completely relevant to the search term, or they’ll simply leave.

The internet is graphics-oriented, so use pictures, diagrams, graphs, and anything else visual to help convey your message. And, unlike print, the internet can be interactive, so if it applies, use it.

But, you don’t want to over-do graphics either because your web site needs to load quickly. If it doesn’t load in less than 10 seconds, your potential sale is most likely gone. He or she is probably checking out your competition!

Possibly the biggest difference between copywriting for any type of print and online copywriting is in the research. You can write any print copy without using particular phrases, but you can’t do that online. Your online copy needs to be written around keywords that are put into search engines by prospects.

Remember that there are lots of copywriting tips you can find free of charge simply by searching with you favorite search engine. And there are several very good copywriters who have free copywriting tips on their web sites. Two that come to mind are Bob Bly and Allan Sharpe.

So those are a few tips for your copywriting. And I’d like to leave you with one final tip. Many would-be copywriters worry too much about their writing. Fear of seeing their copywriting in public, or even on a letter can freeze you into inactivity. I would encourage you to give it a try.

If you’re copywriting for your web site, remember to research keywords first. And then start with an outline if you need it. Start by just writing a few phrases. The point is—just start. Don’t be afraid of mistakes. That’s what editing is for.

Eve Jackson owns Details Small Business Solutions, a company dedicated to helping small business do big business with communication and image consulting. We develop marketing tips, strategies and plans, design matching company identity packages, websites and press kits from start to finish, including online and print copywriting.

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188 Step Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) - Screenwriting, Story Structure - Creative Writing Secrets

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The 188 stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188 stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE 188 STAGE HERO’S JOURNEY:

a) Attempts to tap into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told.

b) Gives the writer more structural elements than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

c) Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually four).

d) Tells you what to write. For example, at a certain stage of the story, the focus should be on the Call to Adventure and the micro elements within.

ABRIDGED TIPS, EXCERPTS AND EXAMPLES:

(simply go to heros-journey.info/ heros-journey.info/ for full details)

*****The Call revealed to the Supernatural Aid*****

The Hero reveals his Call to the Supernatural Aid, who advises the Hero. Characteristics include:

Corrects Misperceptions. The Supernatural Aid corrects any misperceptions the Hero may have.

History. The Supernatural Aid tells the Hero about his past, his links to powerful people (his parents, who were often Kings and gifted themselves), his destiny, his importance, his Dharma, his place in the great scheme of things.

Hero’s Quality. The Supernatural Aid reveals that the Hero has a gift, something that makes him special and noteworthy.

Demon King. The Supernatural Aid tells the Hero that a Demon King destroyed his father (or some relative or close emotional tie). In Lethal Weapon (1987), a criminal murdered Riggs’ wife.

Dangers of the Diversion from the True Path. The Supernatural Aid will warn of the dangers of diverting from the True Path, of not following destiny, of not fulfilling Dharma, of not following the Call.

Magical Aid. The Supernatural Aid will give the Hero Magical Aids (often three or five) that will help him and protect him along his Journey. James Bond often receives multiple gifts from Q that help him through his adventure.

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The Complete 188 stage Hero’s Journey and other story structure templates can be found at monomyth.info/ monomyth.info/

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188 Stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth, Screenwriting) - Pulled Into the Road of Trials

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The 188 stage Hero’s Journey (Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, ALL of the hundreds of Hollywood movies we have deconstructed (see URL below) are based on this 188 stage template.

Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters. This is the template you must master if you are to succeed in the craft.

[The terminology is most often metaphoric and applies to all successful stories and screenplays, from The Godfather (1972) to Brokeback Mountain (2006) to Annie Hall (1977) to Lord of the Rings (2003) to Drugstore Cowboy (1989) to Thelma and Louise (1991) to Apocaplyse Now (1979)].

THERE IS ONLY ONE STORY

THE 188 STAGE HERO’S JOURNEY:

a) Attempts to tap into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told.

b) Gives the writer more structural elements than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

c) Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually four).

d) Tells you what to write. For example, at a certain stage of the story, the focus should be on the Call to Adventure and the micro elements within.

ABRIDGED TIPS, EXCERPTS AND EXAMPLES:

(simply go to heros-journey.info/ heros-journey.info/ for full details)

*****Demonstrating the Magical Gift*****

It is not unusual for the Mentor or Hero to have to demonstrate the Magical Gift. In Brokeback Mountain (2005), Jack uses the gun to shoot the wolf. This often also substitutes as a foreshadow of the coming real use of the Magical Weapon, which is where some obstacle is overcome.

*****Overcoming Doubt (into the Road of Transformation and Trials)*****

Pulled In. Though doubtful, the Hero is pulled into the Transformation. In Shawshank Redemption (1994), the library and helping the guards with their taxes pulls Andy in.

Encouragement. Mentors or some other force may encourage the Hero. In Dances with Wolves (1990), the Indians meet and decide to engage with John. In Scarface (1983), Frank helps Tony’s maturation into dealer. In Gladiator (2000), Juba attempts to persuade Maximus to fight. And Proximo is intrigued by him.

Learn more…

WRITE THAT SCREENPLAY!

The Complete 188 stage Hero’s Journey and other story structure templates can be found at monomyth.info/ monomyth.info/

188 stages of the Hero’s Journey can also be reached from story-structure.org/ story-structure.org/

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